Yesterday was the last day of my Creative Writing class with my teacher Michele Rothkopf. The next class is going to be taught by another person that she picked to take over. I really liked Michele, she was great at editing my writing and encouraging me to do write more and write poems which I never used to do much.
At the End of Course Celebration the students and even their parents read pieces that they had written. I wrote the poem titled Time that is below. It rhymes and I never write ones that rhyme so it is new for me. Also, it is not about dogs. I know, can you believe it?
Please let me know what you think, I like constructive criticism on all my work.
Today changes tomorrow
Tomorrow changes the next
Days go by without stopping
Leaving people perplexed
We cannot stop days from going by
No matter what we do
Time goes on forever
Everyday is new
A day may seem like it never ends
Then we see the truth
Time is precious to us all
No one has eternal youth